For comment, please...
Jeff Zeitlin
(02 Jan 2017 00:17 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please...
Douglas Berry
(02 Jan 2017 01:20 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please... Jeff Zeitlin (03 Jan 2017 00:11 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please...
Richard Aiken
(03 Jan 2017 10:32 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please...
Jeff Zeitlin
(05 Jan 2017 23:01 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please...
shadow@xxxxxx
(03 Jan 2017 10:13 UTC)
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Re: [TML] For comment, please...
Jeff Zeitlin
(05 Jan 2017 23:04 UTC)
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On Sun, 1 Jan 2017 17:20:15 -0800, Douglas Berry <xxxxxx@gmail.com> wrote: >A couple of suggestions. >1. Change the sourcing of the crystals from the rather woo "only the pure >of heart can find them" to a secretive importer who hides the source to >maintain control of the market. This company works through a series of >fronts, DBAs, and other tricks to avoid being pinned down. Buyers might >also be under ferocious nondisclosure agreements. A good idea, but I'm not sure it's the right one. The original concept here wasn't to be all New-Age-woo-pure-of-heart (though if that flips your switch, hey - go for it!); the intent was more-or-less "S/he is unspeakably wealthy, but still manages to stay out of the public eye, and projects a certain 'inner peace' on the rare occasion when you might encounter him/her." The keyword is 'serenity' rather than 'purity', and that in a mostly Western-(mis)understanding-of-Zen sense. They're certainly a status symbol, but they're not the kind of status symbol that you can Go Out And Get To Show That You Have Status. And those who _do_ get them aren't going to be the type to brag about it. Making it a bit more prosaic as you suggest above makes it sound like they're provided by a particularly nasty version of DeBeers - and where there's a definite corporate entity, someone _will_ find a way to "break through", and find out just where South Africa or Mozambique is. Which could be an adventure in itself... >2. Crystal Salons would be the in amenity at Class A starports and high-end >hotels. A soothing massage, a calming cup of groat milk tea, and a nice >soft couch in the Crystal room. This just doesn't feel right to me. While it's clearly not intended to be a specifically solitary sort of thing (but neither is it specifically shared/communal), putting together more-or-less random strangers, even if they're all People Of A Certain Quality, in a Crystal Salon (good name for it!) puts it in a different social space than I'd imagined - think of this as a sort of Zen garden or other meditiative/contemplative space. You might share it with people close to you in certain ways, but it's not the same niche as social bathing or hot-tubbing or Yoga meeting, where the focus seems to be the sharing of the experience, rather than the contemplation. Public Crystal Salons where random strangers might find themselves sharing a session just breaks the mental space I have for them. I'm also not sure that the kind of person that would create a "public" Crystal Salon as an amenity in a starport or a hotel would be the kind of person that could find Crystals to acquire in the first place... >3. The things are addictive. Not immediately, but those who use the salons >on a regular basis start becoming irritable and distracted when separated >from them for any length of time. These are the customers who will pay any >price, do anything, to get their own set. Possibly. Certainly it's not ruled out by what I wrote. I tried to leave a lot of space for interpretation. >4. The crystals can reveal hidden psionic abilities in people. It's rare, >but it happens. Another interesting possibility. At bottom, I agree with you about the New-Age-woo factor, but I'm not sure how to change it and still stay within the sort of feel I was looking for. I hope that perhaps my explanation was helpful. >Nice thing is you could make any sort of campaign out of these.. are they a >plot by the Perfidious Zhodani? A Megacorp addicting important people as >part of corporate espionage and warfare? Or are the crystals harvested only >from one place, a small gas giant moon that is an Ancient site? Or are they >just a cool thing that someone is getting rich off of? Which was more or less my aim in leaving them so wide open and mysterious - maximal room for folks to grab the idea and build adventures. ®Traveller is a registered trademark of Far Future Enterprises, 1977-2016. Use of the trademark in this notice and in the referenced materials is not intended to infringe or devalue the trademark. -- Jeff Zeitlin, Editor Freelance Traveller The Electronic Fan-Supported Traveller® Resource xxxxxx@freelancetraveller.com http://www.freelancetraveller.com Freelance Traveller extends its thanks to the following enterprises for hosting services: onCloud/CyberWeb Enterprises (http://www.oncloud.io) The Traveller Downport (http://www.downport.com)