If you need it, I'm a real freelance proofreader...

Rob Dean

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> On Aug 26, 2014, at 2:28 PM, Rouven Weinbach <weinbach@13mann.de> wrote:
>
> Thanks for pointing that out. We didn't do an extensive proofreading for
> the layout sample but will definately do so for the final product. After
> all, there are still changes coming in.
>
> Am 26.08.2014 18:41, schrieb Craig Berry:
>> Looks very nice, but I'd suggest an intense cycle of proofreading.
>> Just flipping through, I found at the top of page 6 in the "Did you
>> know" box "no one *as* found out" rather than "has". Also, "northpole"
>> rather than "north pole".
>>
>> Also, that storm isn't permanent, so that part is wrong, and it could
>> be explained at any time, so this text is at high risk of becoming
>> obsolete.
>>
>>> On Mon, Aug 25, 2014 at 11:00 PM, Rouven Weinbach <weinbach@13mann.de> wrote:
>>> If you haven't heard of Traveller Liftoff, it's a Starter Set for
>>> Mongoose Traveller, and we've been working on it for some months now.
>>> Now with six days left until the crowdfunding we want to show you a
>>> sample layout of Liftoff. Many of you like the old plain layout and we
>>> respect that, but in order to capture a new and younger audience we had
>>> to spice things up a little. The layout had to be visually pleasing
>>> while at the same time not distract the reading. And this is our solution.
>>>
>>> http://www.13mann.com/index.php/en/traveller-starter-set/downloads?download=211:liftoff-sample-layout
>>>
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