Re: [TML] T-6. Six days until the Traveller Liftoff crowdfunding.
Craig Berry 26 Aug 2014 16:41 UTC
Looks very nice, but I'd suggest an intense cycle of proofreading.
Just flipping through, I found at the top of page 6 in the "Did you
know" box "no one *as* found out" rather than "has". Also, "northpole"
rather than "north pole".
Also, that storm isn't permanent, so that part is wrong, and it could
be explained at any time, so this text is at high risk of becoming
obsolete.
On Mon, Aug 25, 2014 at 11:00 PM, Rouven Weinbach <weinbach@13mann.de> wrote:
> If you haven't heard of Traveller Liftoff, it's a Starter Set for
> Mongoose Traveller, and we've been working on it for some months now.
> Now with six days left until the crowdfunding we want to show you a
> sample layout of Liftoff. Many of you like the old plain layout and we
> respect that, but in order to capture a new and younger audience we had
> to spice things up a little. The layout had to be visually pleasing
> while at the same time not distract the reading. And this is our solution.
>
> http://www.13mann.com/index.php/en/traveller-starter-set/downloads?download=211:liftoff-sample-layout
>
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